兄弟生死中

编者按：很简短却很耐人寻味的小文章。
前世有缘今世才能做兄弟，种如是因，收如是果。
文章的故事结构不错，细节处理和情节的转换之前略微欠缺。
作者的文笔也不错，加油。

暴雨将至，天空卡白，团团乌云伴随雷电，咆哮着，在头顶盘旋。

小赵耸耸肩膀，24岁的他比起身边19岁的张葱壮实得多。
他们正推着一个大推车，赶往附近工地，送安装建材，整车的门框、钢筋，像灌了一样让人举步花足了力气。

“还有几天就要发工资了，”张葱说，“赵哥，谢谢你这么照顾我，到时候，我请你吃夜宵啊！”

“说什么呢？”小赵乐呵呵的说，“我的孩子就要出生了，你啊，攒钱娶媳妇吧！”

“赵哥，你真好！”说着两人一起用力推着车。

时近傍晚，还有十五分钟下班，这批货送完了，就可以顺利下班了，路上行人渐稀，两个苦力工人之间唯有相互鼓励，一天繁重的体力活动才显得不那么没有生趣。

“下班了，回去洗个澡吧。
”小赵自言自语的说。

忽然，狂风大作，雨点急剧敲打下来。
空中白茫茫的一片，风力越来越大，将没有想到，车上的建筑用品掀了起来，抛向空中，又重重落到地上，又被吹到了好几十米远，小赵感觉自己手中的车摇摇晃晃，不听自己掌控，为了仅仅拽住手柄，他跟着车摇晃了好几米远，隐隐约约，他听见身边的张葱“啊”了一声，嗖的从身边消失了，手推车也顺势被风掀翻了，小赵来不及多想，立刻甩掉车柄，伸手去抓，他如同千斤沉重，感觉有几百个人在那边跟他抢夺他，风越来越大，小赵死死不松手，结果自己像沙石一样随着他一起卷进了风的漩涡。

第二天，在城郊下水道的出口处，躺着两具，经过确认，两人正是小赵、张葱，昨晚的风雨让两人不幸跌入下水道的井里，又被地下的水卷走，因为下水道的盖子不知所终了。

在阴曹地府，两人的魂魄苏醒过来，一旁几名五大三粗的牛鬼蛇神正押解他俩上阎王殿，阎王说，“张葱，你劫数已到，今日是你的末期，安排你明年的今天投胎转世，小赵，今日之事本来不关你的事，你非要多管闲事，你在阳间阳寿未尽，罚你做苦役五年，再投胎转世，19岁死于非命。
”

“不要啊，”张葱说，“要罚就罚我吧，跟赵哥无关，是我连累了他。
”

“生死有命，就这么定了。
”阎王斩钉截铁的说。

“那这样吧，阎王大哥，我投胎了以后，请让赵哥，投胎当我弟弟吧，我要好好照顾他。
”

阎王看到了他们的情谊，同意了。

几年以后，张葱出生在了一个杂货铺家庭，由于是老大，自小懂事听话，五年以后，弟弟出生了，两人已经谁也不认识谁，但是总感觉很熟悉。

随着时光的流逝，他们一家人的日子过得其乐融融，不久，他们家经济遇到困难，父亲情急之下病故了，唯一的经济支柱垮了，张葱感觉作为长兄的责任，他毅然放下学业，打工供弟弟读书，初中刚刚毕业的弟弟小赵，哪里想读书，由于在长期接触不好好学习的人，已经慢慢和社会上的人混在了一起，高中寄宿的时候，小赵，每月将钱花了一个精光，还伸手到处要钱，打架、打劫都做过，学校干脆将他开除了。
小赵隐瞒了他，不回家，一直跟一群混混干起了非法勾当。

小赵19岁那一年，和一伙人持刀抢劫，被警察困住，其中一个当头的劫匪让世道较浅的小赵当诱饵，引开警察的视线，自己兵分两路逃跑，又怕他被警察活捉，眼看可以逃脱的时候，悄悄在他的后脑勺打了一枪。

张葱闻讯赶来了时候，看到躺在血泊里面的弟弟，失声痛哭，他不知道为什么，上天这么对待自己。

晚上，张葱回到家里，迷迷糊糊，感觉灵魂出窍，有个声音在说，“兄弟，让我去死，你千万别帮我，不然你会有大难，我已经完成惩罚，下辈子，咱们再做兄弟，我做你大哥，让我照顾你吧。
”

张葱的眼前仿佛浮现了两人在街道上推手推车的情景，下辈子，两人应该还在一起吧，他“嗯”了一声睡着了。

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Preexistence has ability of predestined relationship this age to become brother, kind so because of, close so if really.
The story structure of the article is pretty good, detail is handled and appreciably is deficient in before the changeover of the clue.
The author's style of writing is good also, cheer.
Rainstorm will come, celestial card is white, all round black clouds accompanies thunder, blusterous, circle in the top of head.
Shoulder of alarm of small Zhao Song, him 24 years old compared with beside Zhang Cong of 19 years old is husky much.
They are pushing a big go-cart, drive toward around building site, send installation building materials, truckload doorcase, reinforcing steel bar, like fill let a person step forward euqally the flower became sufficient effort.
"Still a few days are about to send salary, " Zhang Cong says, "Zhao Ge, thank you so take care of me, to moment, I ask you to take food taken late at night! " " what to say? " of small Zhao buoyant say, "My child was about to be born, you ah, assemble money marries son's wife! " " Zhao Ge, you are really good! " saying two people to shifting a car forcibly together.
When close dusk, still 15 minutes come off work, this batch of goods send, can come off work smoothly, the pedestrian on the road gradually rare, two coolie be encouraged each other only between the worker, a day of heavy physical strength activity just appears do not do not have joy of life so.
"Came off work, go back bathe.
" of Xiaozhao solilo-quize say.
Suddenly, fierce wind blows hard, raindrop is beaten quickly come down.
In sky one white, wind-force is bigger and bigger, will not think of, the building things on the car was lifted, cast to the middle of sky, fall to the ground heavily again, be blown to 10 meters several again far, xiaozhao feels the car in him hand is groggy, do not listen to him palm to accuse, to drag stop handle merely, he followed a car to shake several meters far, indistinct, he hears the Zhang Cong beside " ah " , whiz disappeared beside, barrow also take advantage of an opportunity was thrown by wind, xiaozhao has not enough time to think more, swing Che Bing immediately, stretch one's hand go catching, he as hoisting jack heavy, the feeling has hundreds of people to follow his loot there he, wind is bigger and bigger, xiaozhao dead hold on like grim death, him result resembles the eddy that wind coiled together as him like Sha Shi.
The following day, in the exit of sewer of outskirts of a city, lying two bodies, the course affirms, two people are Xiaozhao, Zhang Cong, in the well that the harships last night makes two people unfortunate drop into sewer, be whirled by subterranean water again, because the cap of sewer does not tell an end.
In government office of shade Cao ground, the soul come to one's senses of two people, aside a few strong-bodied bovine ghost snakes are magical send under escort the Palace of Hell on them, hades says, "Zhang Cong, your inexorable doom already arrived, now is your evening, plan your next year today reincarnation reincarnation, xiaozhao, the issue now does not involve your issue originally, you must officious, you are in this world Yang Shouwei8758