我的暑假MySummerHoliday

我的暑假 My Summer Holiday
Summer holiday is coming.I am going to do many things that I want to do.
For exampie,first I will jion a soccer club,because I like playing soccer.During the summer holiday, I want to practice more to improve my skills.Second I will go to my grandma's house,because I miss her very much.I want to stay with her for several days.Last I will help my mother do some housework.
She was really tired when I was go to school.
Except for taking care of me, she also has to work.
Therefore, I want to help her in the holidays.What will you do on Summer Holiday?
暑假就要到来了，我打算做一些我想做的事。比如说，首先我要参加一个足球俱乐部，因为我 踢足球。暑假期间，我想多练习以提高我的技术。其次，我要去奶奶家，因为我很 她。我想和她待几天。最后，我会帮我妈妈做些家务。我去学校的时候她真的很累。除了要照顾我之外，她还要工作。因此，我想在假期帮助她。暑假你会做些什么呢？
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